Can someone please edit my essay?
October 6th, 2007
Catwoman asked:
As a single mother, I have been confronted with, and have successfully overcame issues such as poverty, financial hardships, homelessness, and single parenting. Consequently, I have become committed to helping others achieve personal growth as well as the general well-being of individuals . I have worked with individuals from diverse backgrounds who were facing issues such as homelessness, living with a disability, aging, mental illness, and raising a child as a single parent.As a result of my own personal experiences, I am able to relate to the constant despair and frustration experienced by those who find it challenging to cope with everyday life. I am convinced that increasing one’s own sense of empowerment can make the difference between a future of despondency and one filled with hope.
I am applying to the Master’s in Social Work Program, because it is a step forward in pursuing my life’s mission: helping others in embracing their inner potential to make a positive life transition. Preparation to acheive my personal goal began while I worked at Harbor View Adolescent Center as a Youth Counselor. My primary work responsibility was to serve as a positive role model for adolescents between the ages twelve to eighteen. The adolescents encountered issues such as physical and sexual abuse, abandonment, drug and alcohol abuse, bulimia, depression, and severe behavioral problems. At times, the position was extremely stressful; however, I discovered that I had the ability to connect with the adolescents and develop strong emotional ties. While working with them, I focused on several areas of treatment, including social skills, vocational skills, and independent living skills. My main ambition was to help them build their self-esteem and improve their sense of security. As a youth counselor , I have gained valuable experience in listening to people and helping them make positive decisions in order to improve the quality of their lives. My career goal specifically targets the vulnerable and oppressed individuals who will benefit from improvement in their quality of life. I want to ensure that these groups of individuals have opportunity for services, resources, and much needed guidance.
Personal Strengths: There are several aspects of my personal strengths that I can bring to the field of social work. I am highly caring in regards to other individual needs and feelings. I also speak Spanish fluently and by bringing my bi-lingual ability to the field of social work I can help meet the needs of Spanish speaking clients.
Academic Strengths: As far as my administration abilities, I am very efficient with reports, quarterlies,and paperwork documentation.
Leadership Strengths: I received an outstanding award for being a “Change Leader in 2008″ for improving the quality of lives of the residents that I serve. I am a diligent hard worker in making sure that their needs were met.
Honest….honestly
As a single mother, I have been confronted with, and have successfully overcame issues such as poverty, financial hardships, homelessness, and single parenting. Consequently, I have become committed to helping others achieve personal growth as well as the general well-being of individuals . I have worked with individuals from diverse backgrounds who were facing issues such as homelessness, living with a disability, aging, mental illness, and raising a child as a single parent.As a result of my own personal experiences, I am able to relate to the constant despair and frustration experienced by those who find it challenging to cope with everyday life. I am convinced that increasing one’s own sense of empowerment can make the difference between a future of despondency and one filled with hope.
I am applying to the Master’s in Social Work Program, because it is a step forward in pursuing my life’s mission: helping others in embracing their inner potential to make a positive life transition. Preparation to acheive my personal goal began while I worked at Harbor View Adolescent Center as a Youth Counselor. My primary work responsibility was to serve as a positive role model for adolescents between the ages twelve to eighteen. The adolescents encountered issues such as physical and sexual abuse, abandonment, drug and alcohol abuse, bulimia, depression, and severe behavioral problems. At times, the position was extremely stressful; however, I discovered that I had the ability to connect with the adolescents and develop strong emotional ties. While working with them, I focused on several areas of treatment, including social skills, vocational skills, and independent living skills. My main ambition was to help them build their self-esteem and improve their sense of security. As a youth counselor , I have gained valuable experience in listening to people and helping them make positive decisions in order to improve the quality of their lives. My career goal specifically targets the vulnerable and oppressed individuals who will benefit from improvement in their quality of life. I want to ensure that these groups of individuals have opportunity for services, resources, and much needed guidance.
Personal Strengths: There are several aspects of my personal strengths that I can bring to the field of social work. I am highly caring in regards to other individual needs and feelings. I also speak Spanish fluently and by bringing my bi-lingual ability to the field of social work I can help meet the needs of Spanish speaking clients.
Academic Strengths: As far as my administration abilities, I am very efficient with reports, quarterlies,and paperwork documentation.
Leadership Strengths: I received an outstanding award for being a “Change Leader in 2008″ for improving the quality of lives of the residents that I serve. I am a diligent hard worker in making sure that their needs were met.
Honest….honestly